Our meadow

Our meadow

451 Reads 30 Votes 1 Part Story
Brionie By Brioniexxx Completed

Romance. Short Story. Heart warming. (Written for the 500 words BBC project).

  • 500words
  • bbc500words
  • flowers
  • heart
  • heartwarming
  • inspiration
  • love
  • meadow
  • new
  • ourmeadow
  • teen
  • undiscovered
  • wattpad
- - Apr 20, 2013
quiet bittersweet for a story but I like the flow and use of words in the story that it was interesting. The end where the MC mentioned the tree they carved their names onto and that the tree began to rot, made me feel very sad for them. A really bittersweet story but nicely written.
Brioniexxx Brioniexxx Apr 19, 2013
@DefinitionsOfMe @livenow0619 Thanks everyone for the lovely comments!!!
- - Apr 19, 2013
And I like how you say "You did this", and "You do that", etc.
- - Apr 19, 2013
This is beautiful. Bittersweet, I guess. (Love that word..)
                              The details, the descriptions, amazing. You are a brilliant writer.
livenow0619 livenow0619 Apr 18, 2013
I just love the details and descriptions.  Kudos!  Keep it up!
Brioniexxx Brioniexxx Apr 17, 2013
@katecakemocka @BeautyOfTheDark @swellhell @GirlWithAStoryToTell Thank you all so much for the comments, they are really helpful and mean alot! x