Captivating [Editing]

Captivating [Editing]

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♡Marissa♡ By hiddenheartprincess Updated Feb 13

Book 1 in the New Beginnings Series:

Last minute plans change things for Micah when his dad decides he needs someone to watch over him as he goes away on a business trip. At first Micah's not sure what to think of his father's best friend, Raven but after spending years buried behind art supplies and books something changes. 

A friendship blossoms between them unlike anything Micah or Raven has had before. Common interests pull them together and soon they both realize there's more to this relationship than they thought.

Guiyin Guiyin Aug 20, 2016
So ya had him @ seventeen 😁😁 promiscuous much 😁😁😁 I ain't judging 👌
youlookblue youlookblue Mar 07, 2016
I think it's suppose to be you're, as in you are. But I'm loving the book so far. (:
DeadlySnyper DeadlySnyper Oct 30, 2016
I love when i cant get my jeans over my butt, now if it was thights i would be sad, but butt yas hunny bunny.  #Squatteam
Guiyin Guiyin Aug 20, 2016
Grabbing Dads wallet and giving away his 💰 Daughter goals 😁😁😁😁
Guiyin Guiyin Aug 20, 2016
Dada knows? That is a bit creepy though cept if Pizza boy has always come to deliver,  but if that was the only time CREEP
extrnalove extrnalove Jul 03, 2016
Its really good as an opening maybe use more description ti balance out the speech.