The Younger Eaton (Four's Sister, Divergent Fanfic)

The Younger Eaton (Four's Sister, Divergent Fanfic)

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ScorchRunner By DauntlessScorch Updated Aug 14

What if Tobias had a younger sister named Victoria, who was the same age as Tris?
What would she do when he left her to go to dauntless?
Will she follow in his footsteps?

Victoria Eaton is a brave girl, and is really close to her brother. She fits in Abnegation, but doesn't want to stay because of what her father does to both Tobias and herself.
Tobias doesn't want to leave her, but somehow she convinces him to leave after making a promise.
What will that promise be and will she be able to keep it?

DauntlessScorch DauntlessScorch Nov 14, 2015
The story line will be different when she changes factions but the start I found hard to change
Thelight_inadarkroom Thelight_inadarkroom Nov 14, 2015
The only thing you need to fix is the story line to me it is to much like Tris but other than that perfect!!! I have the books so I know the story line :)
DauntlessScorch DauntlessScorch Sep 08, 2015
THANK YOU SO MUCH
                              i am writing the first chapter this week hopefully updated soon, this part actually took me 2 months to write but now that i have uploaded it, it will push me to work on it more
                              
                              again
                              THANK YOU