The hybrid saved me

The hybrid saved me

45.6K Reads 1.5K Votes 13 Part Story
she-wolf-13 By she-wolf-13 Completed

Lucy is a 17 year old girl she has an abusive father and she self harms what happens when the hybrid that everyone is afraid of comes to her town and turns out to be her mate but Lucy sees a different side of him then what others see he loves her more that anything and would do every and anything for her.

  • abusers
  • completed
  • friends
  • hybrid
  • hybrids
  • love
  • mate
  • romance
  • saved
  • selfharm
  • vampire
  • werewolf
merebear05 merebear05 Jun 10
Sometimes I have to stop and remember that different countries use these words differently, because, in the US homely means ugly, so lovely yet simultaneously ugly
chewy1982 chewy1982 Jun 13
So far I like it but with it running this fast make me wonder what next to keep it going
I love how descriptive you are, however. It always helps makes a story better and more enjoyable
It has a good plot, but you are missing a lot of commas and periods. There are a crap ton of run-on sentences and places where the proper punctuation is not used.
Also, you are repeating stuff that doesn't need to be repeated.