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Pen Your Pride
The hybrid saved me

The hybrid saved me

72.3K Reads 2.3K Votes 13 Part Story
she-wolf-13 By she-wolf-13 Completed

Lucy is a 17 year old girl she has an abusive father and she self harms what happens when the hybrid that everyone is afraid of comes to her town and turns out to be her mate but Lucy sees a different side of him then what others see he loves her more that anything and would do every and anything for her.

  • abusers
  • completed
  • friends
  • hybrid
  • hybrids
  • love
  • mate
  • romance
  • saved
  • selfharm
  • vampire
  • werewolf
merebear05 merebear05 Jun 10, 2017
Sometimes I have to stop and remember that different countries use these words differently, because, in the US homely means ugly, so lovely yet simultaneously ugly
chewy1982 chewy1982 Jun 13, 2017
So far I like it but with it running this fast make me wonder what next to keep it going
I luv it
                              But i would have liked it if there was a longer backstory instead of jumping right into it
                              Its very discriptive(which is awsome),and if u end up going through and editing this, i would recomend you fix the punctuation, it will make things easier to understand
Barrel_Racing_Sorrel Barrel_Racing_Sorrel Jan 29, 2017
I love how descriptive you are, however. It always helps makes a story better and more enjoyable
Barrel_Racing_Sorrel Barrel_Racing_Sorrel Jan 29, 2017
It has a good plot, but you are missing a lot of commas and periods. There are a crap ton of run-on sentences and places where the proper punctuation is not used.
Barrel_Racing_Sorrel Barrel_Racing_Sorrel Jan 29, 2017
Also, you are repeating stuff that doesn't need to be repeated.