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The hybrid saved me

The hybrid saved me

16.9K Reads 469 Votes 13 Part Story
she-wolf-13 By she-wolf-13 Completed

Lucy is a 17 year old girl she has an abusive father and she self harms what happens when the hybrid that everyone is afraid of comes to her town and turns out to be her mate but Lucy sees a different side of him then what others see he loves her more that anything and would do every and anything for her.

I love how descriptive you are, however. It always helps makes a story better and more enjoyable
It has a good plot, but you are missing a lot of commas and periods. There are a crap ton of run-on sentences and places where the proper punctuation is not used.
Also, you are repeating stuff that doesn't need to be repeated.