Mr.Dallas *MAJOR EDITING*

Mr.Dallas *MAJOR EDITING*

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-O2L-Magcon- By -O2L-Magcon- Completed

Crystal Welcher is Seventeen going to highschool again but when she meets her teacher will she keep the feelings in.


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  • camerondallas
  • dirty
  • fanfiction
  • jackg
  • madisonbeer
TheHolyGod TheHolyGod Apr 10
Umm she has a penis now?
                              this is one thing that needs editing...
what the... this is the first day, he's her teacher, and she is cheating on her boyfriend? WTF!!!
rook_claire rook_claire Sep 27
Isn't it too soon? And no offense, but I prefer that you (to the author) use some punctuation marks.... The lines are really long and boring without punctuation
samantha-the-G samantha-the-G May 23, 2016
Not to be ride but is she supposed to be kinda slutty not to like hate cause I like the book and all but just wonted to know.
keyona_fraser keyona_fraser Nov 01, 2016
I thought it was too quick like there wasn't much detail in the day