Poseidon’s progeny

Poseidon’s progeny

664 Reads 14 Votes 3 Part Story
emily By e07egibson Updated Jan 05, 2011

Nerissa has never been normal. After living her whole life under the sea, she begins to yearn to see the land. But, ignoring the warnings, she blindly walks into a dangerous and unpredictable world.

Mermaid + 21st century = BAD!!!!! 

__ovoshari __ovoshari Mar 29, 2011
the beggining makes me think off the litte mermaid!!!
                              LOve it!!!
e07egibson e07egibson Jan 05, 2011
lol sounds good!!! when i upload i'll make sure that i get her to meet somone called marissa lol :)
WelcomeToDreamland WelcomeToDreamland Dec 29, 2010
OMG!! I really really really really really like this story!! I always loved mermaid stuff. Don't ask me why. Oooh!! You should make Nerissa have a BFF or something! Oooh! Her name should be Marrissa! The name means the sea. Just a suggestion.
                              
                              Peace and Love
                              annabethchaseLOL
pinkkida pinkkida Nov 07, 2010
Gud start. But a bit comfuse. U ar rushing to much. Go slow. Tell the story slow so we could get in her. But u have my vote.