Nerissa has never been normal. After living her whole life under the sea, she begins to yearn to see the land. But, ignoring the warnings, she blindly walks into a dangerous and unpredictable world.
Mermaid + 21st century = BAD!!!!!
the beggining makes me think off the litte mermaid!!!
lol sounds good!!! when i upload i'll make sure that i get her to meet somone called marissa lol :)
OMG!! I really really really really really like this story!! I always loved mermaid stuff. Don't ask me why. Oooh!! You should make Nerissa have a BFF or something! Oooh! Her name should be Marrissa! The name means the sea. Just a suggestion.
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Gud start. But a bit comfuse. U ar rushing to much. Go slow. Tell the story slow so we could get in her. But u have my vote.