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The Blind Phantom

The Blind Phantom

19.2K Reads 827 Votes 18 Part Story
Lola Husky By lolahusky88 Updated 7 days ago

Danny Fenton/Phantom was captured by the GIW and the blinded him only for Danny to be saved by Young Justice. Warning Torture.

YSKdragon YSKdragon Apr 16
I keep imagining the dialogue as choppy, 2000s computer generated voices whenever the grammar gets awkward and I can't help but laugh at it.
MalenaStarr MalenaStarr May 14
Um... Weren't they answering Danny's distress signal in the first place?
Writing_onAdrenaline Writing_onAdrenaline Oct 24, 2016
He literally just transformed in front of you five minutes ago!
Writing_onAdrenaline Writing_onAdrenaline Oct 24, 2016
THAT episode.
                              It ticks me off that NOBODY notices when he's overshadowed. It's not like his eyes are BLOOD RED OR ANYTHING.
SinghUnicorn SinghUnicorn Oct 21, 2016
I started singing Hold Up by Beyonce in my head when he said this
Jk5221 Jk5221 Jul 03, 2016
So far, your pacing has been a little fast. Try adding more details to bring the story to life. You have a really awesome idea here and it would so much better if you just reread it and fixed it up a little bit.