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Grammar and spelling mistakes? Can you help me please? I would love to improve thank you
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Omgosh that was mean cute and sweet af wen he asked Jon if he was dead .crying that was beautiful
You should use 'he isn't waking up, and he is barely breathing'
Oh my god. This was SO hard for me to read! My two most favorite YouTubers in the world just died! 😭😭😭😭😭
Ah.. I know you must've wrote this a while ago but I saw in the description you wanted to hear some corrections, if that changed than I would gladly stop.
But instead of "in the couch" it should be "on the couch since you can't exactly sit in a couch, you sit on a couch,
I'm sorry but I just can't stop laughing at the "no, yeah, you're dead as hell" XD
WHAT?! Why would you do this?! I honestly thought that this was gonna have a cute, happy ending but no. Now I'm emotionally dead.