Just as Jacob is starting to become Bella's "personal sun," he imprints on Leah. Heartbroken, Bella finds solace with another werewolf - a more volatile, hot-tempered werewolf who doesn't put up with her pity party. PaulBella, JacobLeah, New Moon AU
Oh my damn, I'm speechless. This is one hell of a beginning. I absolutely love this story so far.
This is so good! Honestly this is legit the only really good twilight fanfic i've read
It's very well writen ,I liked the way you're characters were described and how the're emotions are feeling in every single word that they are saying . :) I liked very much
This is very well written. I liked the whole concept as well.. Her confused emotions have been clearly conveyed in your writing. Very well done! Voted!
Good idea, it is orginal although it's not exactly like twlight the characters are simular. In the future, I suggest maybe taking the idea you get from a book or movie, and start changing little things until it's completly your own.That's what I do :P