Dear Man In The Mirror At The Bar,

Dear Man In The Mirror At The Bar,

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Jackk By JackkDaniels Completed

Get some sleep.

Rinneko Rinneko Oct 14, 2015
Ouch, that hit me right where it hurts. I am currently just as you describe, and the last line certainly gave me a wake-up call.
- - Oct 03, 2015
i read this about four times. i love this rhyming structure, how the hell you pull this off and make everything so fluent i don't know, but i do know that you're a genius. also, the build up to that last line was incredible.
Jamie007 Jamie007 Sep 06, 2015
wow
                              that hits you right in the heart. seriously, the internal turmoil is so well written. its not about wanting to give up drinking he just seems to loathe himself for drinking and drinks some more. thats how most people think sadly they don't realize they can stop it all. beautifully written!
AngelOfDarkness_X AngelOfDarkness_X Sep 05, 2015
I am so glad to see you back and writing,  you are one of the first poets I read seriously. 
                              
                              And this my friend is how I feel exactly... Thank you for sharing,  nice to not feel alone.