White Samurai Girl Book 1: Yin

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Choco Lily By ChocoLily Completed
People would be shocked when they saw a little girl slaying people. Aeris Lockhart was just 13 years old when she was asked to be an assassin in order to protect his younger brother from being murdered. 
    That's because her brother will have to take on the 'White Samurai' name in the future, the name of an assassin that feared by most people. She was forced to leave her parents to be train to be stronger, faster, smarter and emotionless than her prey.
    And she was very surprised to find that her preys were not only human, but also creatures that she never known exists except in the storybooks. She had to bear her father's name until her brother grown up. Until then, she had no choice but to kill those evil creatures or human that she's being paid to kill.
4 inches might as well be a throwing knife, just saying you might wanna do some research
Oh and if you want a normal samurai sword I'd suggest 3 feet
A 6 inch sword is too short even for a short sword the minimum is 12 inches, it might as well be a dagger and daggers can reach a maximum of 10 inches. I'm not trying to be mean but please fix this
I really like this book so far, however I feel the need to point out the fact that there are numerous grammatical errors, as well as punctuation errors. Other than that it's a lovely story so far.
Just a small remark: Yang is a Chinese name but Samurai are Japanese knights. And they are not assassins. Japanese assassins are called Ninjas.
What is Dark RPG? Is that a story we should read before this one?