Deathly Contract (On Hold)

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Call me Eden! By ProjectxxEden Updated 4 years ago
Jade was a normal high school senior girl, with a mundane life. She was pleased with what she had, even if it was not perfect. A fall, and a pair of red scissor later caused Jade to sign away her life to death. Not realizing her mistake, her life is thrown into the world of misery, death and dying. She must overcome the death that once was so close to taking her own life and start taking others.  ********  No bigger than a regular kitchen knife, laid a dagger on my desk. A snake coiled around the blood red handle. The sharp silver end glared back at me. On the back of the blade was something that weird me out the most.    My name,  Jade Arethusa
I get tired of saying the same things in my comments, because in all truth, there are so many great stories out there! So, anyway just wanted to say: I liked it alot. Great job.
I noticed you added a quote at the beginning of this, which is really cool - it adds interest and draws you into the subject quite quickly, which is very effective - great writing :)
This is good. I liked it. Im not good at commenting, so, your not really gonna get much of a comment :\ Sorry. But! This was awesomness!! The ending line was interesting!!
Nice opening poem. It really helped me realize what you were trying to talk about. I read the summary and I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters to find out how she deals! Keep writing!
i really like the poem at the top! i dont really like the rest of it for content but your writing was very good!
This is great, I gotta ask why did you need to give yourself permission to use your own work?  
                                    Very well written and I love ( hate) the cliffhanger. Hehe.