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Deathly Contract (On Hold)

Deathly Contract (On Hold)

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Call me Eden! By ProjectxxEden Updated Feb 02, 2012

Jade was a normal high school senior girl, with a mundane life. She was pleased with what she had, even if it was not perfect. A fall, and a pair of red scissor later caused Jade to sign away her life to death. Not realizing her mistake, her life is thrown into the world of misery, death and dying. She must overcome the death that once was so close to taking her own life and start taking others.  ********  No bigger than a regular kitchen knife, laid a dagger on my desk. A snake coiled around the blood red handle. The sharp silver end glared back at me. On the back of the blade was something that weird me out the most.    My name,  Jade Arethusa

LoveToWrite0089 LoveToWrite0089 Nov 13, 2011
I get tired of saying the same things in my comments, because in all truth, there are so many great stories out there! So, anyway just wanted to say: I liked it alot. Great job.
Stargirlx27 Stargirlx27 Nov 13, 2011
I noticed you added a quote at the beginning of this, which is really cool - it adds interest and draws you into the subject quite quickly, which is very effective - great writing :)
CookieMonstaYumYum CookieMonstaYumYum Nov 13, 2011
This is good. I liked it. Im not good at commenting, so, your not really gonna get much of a comment :\ Sorry. But! This was awesomness!! The ending line was interesting!!
MikaylahS MikaylahS Nov 13, 2011
Nice opening poem. It really helped me realize what you were trying to talk about. I read the summary and I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters to find out how she deals! Keep writing!
RomanticThinkerJacob RomanticThinkerJacob Nov 13, 2011
i really like the poem at the top! i dont really like the rest of it for content but your writing was very good!
yme123 yme123 Nov 10, 2011
This is great, I gotta ask why did you need to give yourself permission to use your own work?  
                              Very well written and I love ( hate) the cliffhanger. Hehe.