Foreign Boy Took My Heart (Completed)✔

Foreign Boy Took My Heart (Completed)✔

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Simply Crazy By newbubble Updated Jul 16

Highest Ranking #5 in General fiction.

Shortlisted for #Yourstoryindia contest in TOP 25 for Final Round.
Winner of Rambling Brooks literary star contest season 2. 


Jessica was so nervous. It was her dream come true. She was in New York, a city of joy and love.

This is a journey of an Indian girl who has:
A terrible past,
Trust issues,
A Conservative family,
And a best friend.

She promised herself that she wouldn't fall in love again, but fate has something else for her. 


Max is a guy who was cynical about love, preferring casual encounters to relationships until, he met Jessica. 

A cocky attitude,
A Strict father,
An Asshole brother,
And a best friend.

He was enjoying his life, but everything changed when she stepped in.


What will happen when two different people unite together? 
What will happen when Max offers Jessica a deal to be his fake girlfriend? 
Will they realize each other's feelings? 

To know more start reading...

***Do you like love stories with a happy ending? Then this book is for you!***

Edited by : @jgfairytales

paviyablue paviyablue Jul 02
                              It was a good start to the chapter. Jessica seems very quirky for a twenty-one year old but she's likeable. You did a good job of describing the family dynamics
I think you should remove the "I heard" part. It's not like they live in a rural place, disconnected from the rest of the world, right?
TheLifeOfJo TheLifeOfJo Jul 03
*laughs at the thought of American boys being hot foreigners*
TheLifeOfJo TheLifeOfJo Jul 03
Now she says this? After letting her fill out and turn in the scholarship months prior??
                              Your dialogue between the characters was top notch! I can't tell you how many stories I read on here where the dialogue is choppy and daft. This was great! I'm excited to see Jessica's journey to NYU! I can practically feel her excitement. Well done!
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