Foreign Boy Took My Heart (Completed)✔

Foreign Boy Took My Heart (Completed)✔

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Simply Crazy By newbubble Updated Jul 16

Highest Ranking #5 in General fiction.

Shortlisted for #Yourstoryindia contest in TOP 25 for Final Round.
Winner of Rambling Brooks literary star contest season 2. 

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Jessica was so nervous. It was her dream come true. She was in New York, a city of joy and love.

This is a journey of an Indian girl who has:
A terrible past,
Trust issues,
A Conservative family,
And a best friend.

She promised herself that she wouldn't fall in love again, but fate has something else for her. 

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Max is a guy who was cynical about love, preferring casual encounters to relationships until, he met Jessica. 

With:
A cocky attitude,
A Strict father,
An Asshole brother,
And a best friend.

He was enjoying his life, but everything changed when she stepped in.

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What will happen when two different people unite together? 
What will happen when Max offers Jessica a deal to be his fake girlfriend? 
Will they realize each other's feelings? 

To know more start reading...

***Do you like love stories with a happy ending? Then this book is for you!***

Edited by : @jgfairytales

paviyablue paviyablue Jul 02
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                              It was a good start to the chapter. Jessica seems very quirky for a twenty-one year old but she's likeable. You did a good job of describing the family dynamics
I think you should remove the "I heard" part. It's not like they live in a rural place, disconnected from the rest of the world, right?
TheLifeOfJo TheLifeOfJo Jul 03
*laughs at the thought of American boys being hot foreigners*
TheLifeOfJo TheLifeOfJo Jul 03
Now she says this? After letting her fill out and turn in the scholarship months prior??
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                              Your dialogue between the characters was top notch! I can't tell you how many stories I read on here where the dialogue is choppy and daft. This was great! I'm excited to see Jessica's journey to NYU! I can practically feel her excitement. Well done!
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