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Ever After

Ever After

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New username. :S By LogiPoo Completed

"His eyes - oh, God, his eyes - were an entirely different story. Staring into his eyes was like staring into the summer sky just before the sunset came, before the yellow, pink, and purple clouds came to fog up your vision. They were the definition of a cloudless sky, a clear river seen running through a wide field of grass, that one, blue, sparkling diamond that stood out more than any other in a goldmine. Shining like the stars and as light as a feather, they tricked you into a strange sense of security, a state that one would be foolish to leave intentionally. Everything about his eyes was passionate, beautiful, and enticing, anything a man could ever ask for. I wanted more of his eyes, more of him."

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LifeKicks LifeKicks Mar 18
When he stops swearing is when I hate the shade black and color crimson IT AINT HAPPENING PEOPLE
actually i save all my fucks for senpai if ya know what i mean *wink wink
The literary devices at use here are wonderful! They add a special touch to story. And I just started reading it!
*poofs up* I am from the future, he swears forever and yells at a camera for a living*poofs away*
                              AND I THOUGHT ME AND QUI-GON JINN
                              COULD TALK THE FEDERATION INTO
                              CUTTING THEM A LITTLE SLACK
                              BUT THEIR RESPONSE IT DIDN'T THRILL US
                              THEY LOCKED THE DOORS AND TRIED TO KILL US
                              WE ESCAPED FROM THAT GAS
                              THEN MET JAR JAR AND BOSS NASS
I can't decide if she's melodramatic or overemotional but aww at least she cares