The Fragile Mask:On Hold

The Fragile Mask:On Hold

54.7K Reads 1.5K Votes 22 Part Story
The odd sky By Anti18 Updated Nov 20, 2016

One day a boy,named Tsunayoshi was happy and he was loved by everyone in town,then the next he was bullied and doesn't know why.Then his parents and younger brother started to abused him too.Everyone thought he was dame but in truth it was all a mask.He was really smart and was the 2nd best hit man and best hacker in the word going by Orenji-iro no sora 27.

  • comfort
  • cooltsuna
  • dark
  • friendship
  • guardians
  • hurt
  • khr
  • mafia
  • memorieserased
  • strongtsuna
  • tsuna
  • twin
So how much is that in days...😇
                              *slowly pulls out a bat*😇
                              Just wondering how !many times I have to hit someone😇
Sukikmu Sukikmu Dec 20, 2015
its a bit rushed and there are gramatical mistakes here and there but overall and its good
Ky-Sama_Kitsune Ky-Sama_Kitsune Dec 06, 2015
Perfect Description of Bykuran-sama xD srry if I spelled his name wrong
SawadaAkaneX27 SawadaAkaneX27 Nov 03, 2015
Its a little confusing for me cuz the typing stuff. Try to make the dialog 1 step apart then another step apart when your finished also the pov seperate them cuz its really annoying to see it along with an paragraph.
SawadaAkaneX27 SawadaAkaneX27 Nov 03, 2015
I seriously HATE NANA SO MUCH!!! I WILL NEVER FORGIVE ANYONE WHO DARES TO HURT MY TSU-CHAN!!!
Kanaryaxx Kanaryaxx Oct 02, 2015
I do like the story, I really do but do you think you could space out your paragraphs. It's a little difficult to read