The boy in the hospital bed

The boy in the hospital bed

46.9K Reads 1.5K Votes 37 Part Story
Renna Collins By k_collins01 Completed

I'm not good at this so just give it a try. 


Hey y'all just letting you know that I'm fixing everything and editing it. Still readable :)

  • cry
  • cute
  • fiction
  • hospital
  • teen
  • teenlove
Everyone is judging the author. Like gosh, the character is supposed to be snobby and bossy, it's the whole point of the book!
Not judging but uhhhhh RED heels and PINK dresses don't match... 😂
reusation reusation Jun 28, 2016
Wait wait wait.....sooo ya wanna telle me that this is one of the main Characters...?? You kidding me right,!😑😂😂
0Pseudonym0 0Pseudonym0 Aug 21, 2016
This was quite literally me reading this story.
                              Don't worry, it's safe for work.
Thirteenish1 Thirteenish1 May 15, 2016
I really like it, I think it helps the story move along. And there is usually those preppy girls like that. So I think it makes sense, but that is just me. Great Job on the story so far!!! 😀
Phelony Phelony Mar 01, 2016
You should also try separating it into more paragraphs, tbh, it's easier on the eye. Sometimes, you will lose where you were reading and have to read over again to find it.