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The Alpha's Girl's

The Alpha's Girl's

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Love555 By Love555 Updated Aug 17, 2013

Maison is a 16 year old wolf. She hasn't found her mate but is pregnant with the alpha baby. So when she found him as her mate but he rejects her she leaves. Two years later her old pack and new pack form together. When she see Kadian again after so long with their 3 year old daughter. Are their old sparks go to reunit or is Maison done with him?

That_Girl5k That_Girl5k Apr 20, 2015
Omg so sad I hate it when ppl reject them if they are your mate you reject the girl that is not your mate!
LaceyM55 LaceyM55 Jul 20, 2013
You may be young but I think you can get better:) keep writing and you will get there:) good stories by the way. You may need an editor but you have the right idea of what you are trying to write. Just keep trying:)
DangerousBunnii DangerousBunnii Jul 09, 2013
I'm assuming you're very young?
                              You should put a warning sign to let us all know you arent experienced in story telling and grammar.
                              So sorry that i'm coming of rude, but to be honest, most people that can stand carrying on reading this are 13 year olds down.
roroandbayboy roroandbayboy Jul 08, 2013
its alright and im not trying to be rude but you should put more detail in and slow it down a little:)
KianaHawkins KianaHawkins Jul 05, 2013
In the prologue, it says she comes back after 2 years but has a 3 year old daughter. That doesn't really make any sense especially when she's pregnant at 16 and not 15. Also you might want to read through your work. A few grammar mistakes here and there but really good story! Keep it up! :D
ZaynLuv1234 ZaynLuv1234 Jun 24, 2013
Dude this book is awsome i love it its so intersting im reading it at summer school. On my teacher ipad4 she is so nice