Across The River

Across The River

168 Reads 4 Votes 2 Part Story
Selena By xX01Selena10Xx Updated Oct 06, 2010

Anabelle is like every other girl in the world, has a decent family, beautiful, and has a boyfriend that shes not really sure if she really likes him. One night while walking through the woods she runs into a man who is really good-looking, with pink full lips, emerald colored eyes like hers and well actually he looked a lot like her. When she asks him why that is, he says," Anabelle your my sister and we need you back at the kingdom."

xX01Selena10Xx xX01Selena10Xx Oct 02, 2010
@frakkevin oh I know I didn't finish putting the rest of it up. and ok.
KAFrak KAFrak Oct 01, 2010
It's a decent start, not much happened though. There wasnt a big enough cliff hanger though. It was just peaceful kids playing and a wife mourning...so remember make some action happen..it could be physical or mentally. 
                              
                              
                              
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YellowCottonHat YellowCottonHat Oct 01, 2010
This is really good! It's well written, but if the format was improved it'd be even better. (: