A Bad Influence

A Bad Influence

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AMY0003 By AMY0003 Completed

Jessica is your everyday not-so-stereotypical nerd. She does not act like regular nerds, who are obsessed with having perfect grades, although she is an A+ student and not very noticeable. She is more like wallpaper than an actual talking human, until she meets the school bad boy. They became immediate enemies (well, after she gets over his good looks). They are forced to spend time together since they both are in many of the same classes and have the same job. But he begins to rub off on her, and she suddenly becomes more confident and courageous. Is this a bad thing? Or is he just a bad influence?

EDMlover96 EDMlover96 Sep 24
Its funny how people deny that they'll never find love or whatever but in the end that's what happens we all find love whether we choose to accept it or we deny it.
gengen5142 gengen5142 Jan 26, 2015
bro! I'm a 7th grader, math nerd, and I don't even know that shit!!
WishesOnStars WishesOnStars Aug 29, 2014
This is really good I love the way that your characters are already coming to life :)
- - Aug 17, 2013
The plot is good. I liked the way you described jessica\'s appearance and I like her personality. I also liked her encounter with James. Even though your story is good its a bit cliche.
AMY0003 AMY0003 Aug 11, 2013
@Cailohippie okay I will make sure to fix that and I am glad!
Cailohippie Cailohippie Aug 11, 2013
This is very good, I like your topic and the way the characters act around each other. Your description are good too, it conveys the characters feelings about certain topics, so well done! I enjoyed it :) The only bad thing I can say is that you once used then one too many times in a sentence!