Just read it.
@fantasymotion Thank you. I gave it that kind of description because I honestly don't know where I'm going with this story. I can't describe something that I don't have the answer to. Lol. Thanks again.
@ThePoetryGirl Thank you...I appreciate your comment.
Your writing style is unique and really interesting. I loved reading it because it seems different from other people's work and got me really into your story. Good job!
I love your writing style! And this sounds really, really good. I like how there's an element of mystery :)
This is quite good. I liked the way you set the tone for the story with only a few words in the beginning.
I don't see anything wrong with this. I'm not that big of a fan of gigantic descriptions, so this is just enough.
@AlwaysHope Thank you and you're right. I didn't realize that I used it 5 times until I went back over and counted. It is a bit much considering how short this chapter is. I'll fix that and thanks again.