Unspeakable

Unspeakable

1.2K Reads 17 Votes 5 Part Story
ambiance By ambiance Updated Nov 08, 2011

Just read it.

ambiance ambiance Nov 10, 2011
@fantasymotion Thank you.  I gave it that kind of description because I honestly don't know where I'm going with this story.  I can't describe something that I don't have the answer to. Lol. Thanks again.
                              
                              ambiance :)
ambiance ambiance Nov 10, 2011
@ThePoetryGirl Thank you...I appreciate your comment.
                              
                              ambiance :)
ThePoetryGirl ThePoetryGirl Nov 10, 2011
Your writing style is unique and really interesting. I loved reading it because it seems different from other people's work and got me really into your story. Good job!
CharlieLayne CharlieLayne Nov 08, 2011
I love your writing style! And this sounds really, really good. I like how there's an element of mystery :)
CristianMihai CristianMihai Oct 24, 2011
This is quite good. I liked the way you set the tone for the story with only a few words in the beginning.
                              
                              I don't see anything wrong with this. I'm not that big of a fan of gigantic descriptions, so this is just enough.
ambiance ambiance Dec 12, 2010
@AlwaysHope Thank you and you're right.  I didn't realize that I used it 5 times until I went back over and counted.  It is a bit much considering how short this chapter is.  I'll fix that and thanks again.