Wanting to be loved (Zuko)

Wanting to be loved (Zuko)

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Calypso-Nox By Calypso-Nox Completed

This story follows the life of Miku, a friend of Sokka and Katara. She joins them and the avatar on his journey to master all four elements.
*Zuko love story*

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Korean is my First language it took years For me to talk English correctly and even now my English is still bad so I understand
zoefaye12 zoefaye12 Jul 26
Good job on this story! Aside from a few grammar mistakes the plot seems really cool so far
You could definitely look over the book again. No offense, but I'm used to quotation marks for when people are talking. That is just what I would prefer, at least. Also, some commas might be out of place and you probably have a couple run-on sentences. But it looks pretty good, otherwise.
Jeklym Jeklym Mar 27, 2016
If you gave the book some space betweem the each paragraph it would look better, and be a lot easier to read. Just a small tip;)
11joyce12 11joyce12 Feb 11, 2016
Is calypso your first name? Isn't that the woman in Greek mythology who was trapped on a island? ( I'm a grade A geek )
Baby_Girl550 Baby_Girl550 Nov 05, 2016
That's awesome are you multilingual or bilingual cause I'm multilingual since I speak English Spanish, and Haitian Creole