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Living With a Hot Guy and His Brother

Living With a Hot Guy and His Brother

37.4K Reads 405 Votes 15 Part Story
Jasmin By jasmin28 Updated May 16, 2013

17 year old Alice's life sucks. She never had a boyfriend and all her friends hate her except Lea. Because of her bad grades she gets sent to her grandma’s where there is a really good private school. Little did Alice now that her rich grandma is taking care of her dead best friends 2 sons. One of them is hot, while the other is…okay. And she may develop feelings for both of them…who will she choose?

kenziegurl0000 kenziegurl0000 Mar 16, 2011
I like this chapter better than the previous. ur writing keeps getting better :) 
                              and for the cliffy - uhm ben?
kenziegurl0000 kenziegurl0000 Mar 16, 2011
Rating; 3/5 stars!
                              Quick overview: Love it! 
                              Constructive criticism: 
                              I think the story moves a bit too fast, if ya know what I mean. Maybe try to slow down a bit instead of moving through days and weeks at a time. 
                              Can't wait 2 read ahead xD
Okaythen18 Okaythen18 Oct 28, 2010
This is a good start. It's interesting and getting towards entertaining. I personally love most of the discriptions and the cliffhanger was great. It's always a good thing to keep a reader (Me :D), wanting to read more after a chapter.
adrianasntlln adrianasntlln Oct 26, 2010
Love it! The character's are likable and i like the actor you picked, and ben barnes is hot!!!
readalotraji readalotraji Oct 10, 2010
upload, i want to know what happens next but i think its like what inmyownworld1.
ananya1995 ananya1995 Oct 02, 2010
Its really good, interestin storyline nd all :P
                              upload somemore