Living With a Hot Guy and His Brother

Living With a Hot Guy and His Brother

37.3K Reads 405 Votes 15 Part Story
Jasmin By jasmin28 Updated May 16, 2013

17 year old Alice's life sucks. She never had a boyfriend and all her friends hate her except Lea. Because of her bad grades she gets sent to her grandma’s where there is a really good private school. Little did Alice now that her rich grandma is taking care of her dead best friends 2 sons. One of them is hot, while the other is…okay. And she may develop feelings for both of them…who will she choose?

SweetSour17 SweetSour17 Nov 11, 2013
Why would she be friends with bi+ches anyways. And call her fake a** dad dad because honestly he don't act like a REAL caring dad. Do she not have a mom? because I'm sure her mom wouldn't have let "dad" send her away.
kenziegurl0000 kenziegurl0000 Mar 16, 2011
I like this chapter better than the previous. ur writing keeps getting better :) 
                              
                              and for the cliffy - uhm ben?
kenziegurl0000 kenziegurl0000 Mar 16, 2011
Rating; 3/5 stars!
                              
                              Quick overview: Love it! 
                              
                              Constructive criticism: 
                              
                              I think the story moves a bit too fast, if ya know what I mean. Maybe try to slow down a bit instead of moving through days and weeks at a time. 
                              
                              Can't wait 2 read ahead xD
                              
Okaythen18 Okaythen18 Oct 28, 2010
This is a good start. It's interesting and getting towards entertaining. I personally love most of the discriptions and the cliffhanger was great. It's always a good thing to keep a reader (Me :D), wanting to read more after a chapter.
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adrianasntlln adrianasntlln Oct 26, 2010
Love it! The character's are likable and i like the actor you picked, and ben barnes is hot!!!
readalotraji readalotraji Oct 10, 2010
upload, i want to know what happens next but i think its like what inmyownworld1.