Intertwined Lines

Intertwined Lines

304 Reads 5 Votes 2 Part Story
penguingurl91 By penguingurl91 Updated Oct 02, 2010

This is a story about a husband and wife, and the people they touch whether directly or indirectly.  Also I may not know exactly how the entire story is going to go, I promise you if you read to the end of the story it will have a happy ending, I've already planned it.  So if you have any advice on how to add to the story, please let me know, the only thing I won't be changing is the ending or the total use of pronouns instead of nouns.  It's a style I'm trying and I think it makes the story more relate-able. 

shadowofthemoon shadowofthemoon Oct 02, 2010
the last part was really good! I had that big "Awe" moment which is what you want in writing! I can't what to read the ending!!