A Monster's Bride (editing)

A Monster's Bride (editing)

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Alexis J.Smith By ASJwritings Updated Oct 12

Florence Paige's life is nothing like the one she had dreamed for  nineteen years. Locked away in her father's large estate for her whole life, she had hoped for a fairytale ending.
  
  But her stubborn and ruthless father had other plans for her.
  After Florence  is kidnapped and forced to marry a ruthless man with a dark past and hidden secrets, she starts to grow used to her new life as a rich heiress.
  
  But it comes to change as Florence's life has always been hanging from a thin thread and her background does nothing  but throw ten ton bricks toward her and she is left to trust the monster that she despises most;
  
  Her husband.
  
  Will she be his saving grace from a scarred heart?
  Or will he be hers?
  
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  Note: This is an unedited FIRST DRAFT and a work in progress. There will be thousands of mistakes, typos, plot-holes, and other issues. My goal is to edit this eventually and fix some of those problems.
  
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  Cover by: ASJwritings

I really do like this chapter, and don't mean to sound like a grammar nazi, but you are missing a few apostrophes (of course that's understandable since you said that you wrote this quickly).
azmeralda16 azmeralda16 May 07
Girl u r amazing 😍 I just read the beginning and  my heart beat fast to now more
artmyra artmyra Jan 31
Love the starting. Great beginning. Keeps readers interested
I can imagine the introduction being told in a mist. I like it.
W_S_L_Y_19 W_S_L_Y_19 Mar 11
I like that you decided to make a kind of dive - in beginning.l
savage-love savage-love Sep 09
Reading this got me so excited to read the book lol😂😂❤️