50.7K Reads 1.8K Votes 5 Part Story
TEJAL By diana97ooo Updated Sep 23, 2015

NIKOLAI IVANOV, King of Chicago's  underworld . He's ruthless ,cold-hearted ,rich, and handsome.
He won't think about putting a bullet in your head, if you piss him off. 
But  all he really wants is for someone to love him despite his past . 

MAYA COOPER , a sweet and innocent girl who believes that everyone is good in this world . 

What happens when NIKOLAI falls in love with her at first sight and will do anything to make her, his.......... Because what Nikolai wants , Nikolai takes 


A token of thanks to mon - princesse
for being a wonderful editor ........
And also to souadisch for making a fabulous cover ...........
Thanks a lot both of you :)

Please dont write in all capitals. I am litteraly SCREAMING IN MY HEAD
All I'd say is just add a vary of sentence structures
                               You have the potential its just not there yet :-)
This kind of reminds me of the movie John wick, and I'm just not sure if the Russian guys name is also ivanov, but interesting beginning, good job 👍🏼
PARobbins PARobbins Mar 13
It's a good starting point. I like the story line, just needs to be finessed.
Hey just started reading it..and I already love it..apart from the spelling mistakes I am already intrigued by the story..
Damn you wanna cry on my shoulder but fly to Amsterdam first bruh i aint comin to you