Little Fanged Girl is a dark fairy tale, which features vampirism in a totally different light. It's a bedtime story for the brave, with a slow mysterious plot that combines bitter sweetness along side eeriness.
Thanks for your advice. I will take a look at my dialogue now. @twiggysky
Great opening! I love your description in the first couple of lines - it's vivid and atmospheric. I also like the way you slowly reveal what's abnormal about the little girl - it adds a touch of creepiness. I also love the title.
Wow the ending creeped me out. Vamps creep me out xD
good job. and love the cover :)
Aw thank you! I thought the cliff dancing was pretty haunting. X
This is def awesome and beautifully written, I love that she's twirling on the rocks next to the sea in a storm... Awesome =D
And the last part is scary but in a suspenseful way..
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