Little Fanged Girl

Little Fanged Girl

3.5K Reads 83 Votes 4 Part Story
BlondFangs By BlondFangs Completed

Little Fanged Girl is a dark fairy tale, which features vampirism in a totally different light. It's a bedtime story for the brave, with a slow mysterious plot that combines bitter sweetness along side eeriness.

BlondFangs BlondFangs Sep 26, 2012
Thanks for your advice. I will take a look at my dialogue now. @twiggysky
makexbelieve makexbelieve Sep 26, 2012
Great opening! I love your description in the first couple of lines - it's vivid and atmospheric. I also like the way you slowly reveal what's abnormal about the little girl - it adds a touch of creepiness. I also love the title.
RahniaForever RahniaForever Sep 26, 2012
Wow the ending creeped me out. Vamps creep me out xD
                               good job. and love the cover :)
BlondFangs BlondFangs Dec 05, 2010
@Whiskeynscotch
                              Aw thank you! I thought the cliff dancing was pretty haunting. X 
Whiskeynscotch Whiskeynscotch Dec 05, 2010
This is def awesome and beautifully written, I love that she's twirling on the rocks next to the sea in a storm... Awesome =D 
                              And the last part is scary but in a suspenseful way..
                              Voted. =D 
BlondFangs BlondFangs Nov 22, 2010
Hey, just a heads up that I finally updated Vampire Infant. I'd luv to know what you think. X @Dear_Sincerely @BadAssBarracuda @AudreyCloverTwinkle @MissMercy @_TouchTheSky10203 @Vitaniana @cuttiegurl @frakkevin