Forgetting To Remember

Forgetting To Remember

15.3K Reads 212 Votes 4 Part Story
Lily Avenue By LilyAvenue Completed

"Sometimes you have to be apart from people you love, but that doesn't make you love them any less. Sometimes you love them more." 
— Nicholas Sparks

Amazerful Amazerful Dec 18, 2011
Great chapter. I really like your descriptions, it flowed well. 
                              This story has potential. You have a really unique writing style that captures my attention :)
                              
                              Great work.
                              
                              Oh and I love Nicolas Sparks's books, they're so so good!!
MilkyTea MilkyTea Nov 07, 2011
I love how slow your going with the story. Very descriptive, I'm liking your style of writing but it did seem to go on just a little bit. Keep it up;D
taymo09 taymo09 Aug 19, 2011
Beautiful, just beautiful!  I loved how descriptive you were, setting the perfect pace and tone for the rest of the story.  Voted! :)
Angel_Eyes24 Angel_Eyes24 Aug 16, 2011
hey sorry for getting to this so late. I have to say this is pretty interesting, though I'm not a big fanning of reading romances (pretty ironic I guess). But still, you did a good job with this. votes!
NitaLeung NitaLeung Aug 14, 2011
I really like how you write, but found that this chapter seemed a little long. I also felt that there were too much descriptions. Nonetheless, your writing seems very mature, and I like that. :)
MichelleadamsRG MichelleadamsRG Aug 13, 2011
Ann Hathaway and Jake G. would make such a cute couple in real life. This had really good descriptions, and I just loved your writing style. voted!