These are poems where I will sit and observe something, and write about it.
This was very endearingly sweet and vivid in the way you've written it.. Its terrifically fantastic!
This was somewhat bittersweet and cynical but I loved the amusing lines and the complex storytelling your giving here to mean so much more than this.. It was wonderful and somewhat profound.
ive never read a poem from this point of view
its utterly fantastic!
aha very original i love it