Observational Poems

Observational Poems

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Caleb By CalebPaul Updated Jan 23, 2011

These are poems where I will sit and observe something, and write about it.

nicollettenikki nicollettenikki Oct 05, 2010
This was very endearingly sweet and vivid in the way you've written it.. Its terrifically fantastic! 
nicollettenikki nicollettenikki Oct 05, 2010
This was somewhat bittersweet and cynical but I loved the amusing lines and the complex storytelling your giving here to mean so much more than this.. It was wonderful and somewhat profound. 
edgeofthelaw edgeofthelaw Sep 30, 2010
wow!
                              ive never read a poem from this point of view
                              its utterly fantastic!
                              aha very original i love it