A chance meeting at party thrusts Tania into the midst of the world of psychics, were-creatures, spirits and the worst of them all: Alex, the irritating vampire who won't leave her alone.
Saw you posting in the "Stupid people can get off wattpad" thread, and decided to give you a read. haha
                                    
                                    "bodies all around her Tania was", add a comma after 'her'
                                    
                                    "stuck from behind she was" comma after 'behind'
                                    
                                    "in front of the rest of the people crowding", just a suggestion but maybe "in front of everyone that was crowding"
                                    
                                    I wish I could copy and paste this sentence.
                                    
                                    "deep breath she looked down", comma after 'breath'
                                    "with mounting horror that the" comma after 'horror'
                                    
                                    'god' = 'God', it's technically a name
                                    
                                    "brow quizzically then smiled", either a comma after 'quizzically', or what I like to do, which is switch 'then' with 'before'
                                    
                                    Hope this help = )
                                    I only read page one, if you would like more, let me know and when I have free time I'll give the rest a read
Saw you posting in the "Stupid people can get off wattpad" thread, and decided to give you a read. haha
                                    
                                    "bodies all around her Tania was", add a comma after 'her'
                                    
                                    "stuck from behind she was" comma after 'behind'
                                    
                                    "in front of the rest of the people crowding", just a suggestion but maybe "in front of everyone that was crowding"
                                    
                                    I wish I could copy and paste this sentence.
                                    
                                    "deep breath she looked down", comma after 'breath'
                                    "with mounting horror that the" comma after 'horror'
                                    
                                    'god' = 'God', it's technically a name
                                    
                                    "brow quizzically then smiled", either a comma after 'quizzically', or what I like to do, which is switch 'then' with 'before'
                                    
                                    Hope this help = )
                                    I only read page one, if you would like more, let me know and when I have free time I'll give the rest a read
Saw you posting in the "Stupid people can get off wattpad" thread, and decided to give you a read. haha
                                    
                                    "bodies all around her Tania was", add a comma after 'her'
                                    
                                    "stuck from behind she was" comma after 'behind'
                                    
                                    "in front of the rest of the people crowding", just a suggestion but maybe "in front of everyone that was crowding"
                                    
                                    I wish I could copy and paste this sentence.
                                    
                                    "deep breath she looked down", comma after 'breath'
                                    "with mounting horror that the" comma after 'horror'
                                    
                                    'god' = 'God', it's technically a name
                                    
                                    "brow quizzically then smiled", either a comma after 'quizzically', or what I like to do, which is switch 'then' with 'before'
                                    
                                    Hope this help = )
                                    I only read page one, if you would like more, let me know and when I have free time I'll give the rest a read
Saw you posting in the "Stupid people can get off wattpad" thread, and decided to give you a read. haha
                                    
                                    "bodies all around her Tania was", add a comma after 'her'
                                    
                                    "stuck from behind she was" comma after 'behind'
                                    
                                    "in front of the rest of the people crowding", just a suggestion but maybe "in front of everyone that was crowding"
                                    
                                    I wish I could copy and paste this sentence.
                                    
                                    "deep breath she looked down", comma after 'breath'
                                    "with mounting horror that the" comma after 'horror'
                                    
                                    'god' = 'God', it's technically a name
                                    
                                    "brow quizzically then smiled", either a comma after 'quizzically', or what I like to do, which is switch 'then' with 'before'
                                    
                                    Hope this help = )
                                    I only read page one, if you would like more, let me know and when I have free time I'll give the rest a read
Saw you posting in the "Stupid people can get off wattpad" thread, and decided to give you a read. haha
                                    
                                    "bodies all around her Tania was", add a comma after 'her'
                                    
                                    "stuck from behind she was" comma after 'behind'
                                    
                                    "in front of the rest of the people crowding", just a suggestion but maybe "in front of everyone that was crowding"
                                    
                                    I wish I could copy and paste this sentence.
                                    
                                    "deep breath she looked down", comma after 'breath'
                                    "with mounting horror that the" comma after 'horror'
                                    
                                    'god' = 'God', it's technically a name
                                    
                                    "brow quizzically then smiled", either a comma after 'quizzically', or what I like to do, which is switch 'then' with 'before'
                                    
                                    Hope this help = )
                                    I only read page one, if you would like more, let me know and when I have free time I'll give the rest a read
Saw you posting in the "Stupid people can get off wattpad" thread, and decided to give you a read. haha
                                    
                                    "bodies all around her Tania was", add a comma after 'her'
                                    
                                    "stuck from behind she was" comma after 'behind'
                                    
                                    "in front of the rest of the people crowding", just a suggestion but maybe "in front of everyone that was crowding"
                                    
                                    I wish I could copy and paste this sentence.
                                    
                                    "deep breath she looked down", comma after 'breath'
                                    "with mounting horror that the" comma after 'horror'
                                    
                                    'god' = 'God', it's technically a name
                                    
                                    "brow quizzically then smiled", either a comma after 'quizzically', or what I like to do, which is switch 'then' with 'before'
                                    
                                    Hope this help = )
                                    I only read page one, if you would like more, let me know and when I have free time I'll give the rest a read