Cinderella vs. Prince Charming

20 Part Story 1.4M Reads 16.4K Votes
Lauren By LaurenDMSmith Completed
Darren dropped the note addressed to the “Prince Charming wannabe” and announced “Well then Cinderella, I propose a game. If I win, you must come away with me. If you win, I leave and never return. The game itself is this: I have to find you.”
Love the idea for this story I have so many questions but i feel these will be answered later on in the story, Chapter one and I'm already in love with this story!
you repeated sweat twice i just notice that after like the third ti me reading this xD
think about using POV's I can hardly understand who is talking and who isn't.
My guess is that Prince Darren said  that they would both now who each other are because of love at first sight! This sort of feeling that happened in the real Cinderella movie where they saw each other the ball and they knew they were ment for each other.
This story is awesome!!! I rrally love this twist to the whole Cinderella story! You are a really talented writer!:)
how did valerie know that she was the princess he was looking for ? 
                                    someone plz answer me !