Killing me Softly....

Killing me Softly....

1.7K Reads 17 Votes 4 Part Story
Ree By xoxoAngelxoxo Updated Apr 17, 2011

As Dorothy begins to have more and more nightmares a strange feeling creeps up her spine every time. But one time, the nightmare didn't end and she realized she had landed smack into reality with a man who wanted nothing more than to torture her until she was nothing but a little pile of dust....

hailee22599 hailee22599 Aug 29, 2011
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KAFrak KAFrak Oct 11, 2010
You're a good writer, I say change Amanda's name. Having names that are similar can easily confuse some readers. It's no big deal though. Honeslty I didnt find anything wrong with this. I don't think it matters what brand of clothes she wearing, but also no biggie.
                              
                              
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XxLucidDreamerxX XxLucidDreamerxX Oct 04, 2010
This is really good! I'm definately gonna keep reading this. Post more PLEASE!!! 
KAFrak KAFrak Sep 29, 2010
Have her mention her feet being damp...you dont have to though. I like the start but it's not enough to judge the complete story or the actual plot yet. Your next chapter has to start the story and allow us to get to know this girl.
                              
                              
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