The Ex-Pacifist: Book One of The Matsumoto Trilogy (Complete)

The Ex-Pacifist: Book One of The Matsumoto Trilogy (Complete)

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Sarah K.L. Wilson By sarahklwilson Completed

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Vera is a reluctant rule-breaker. But when her choice ends in a death sentence, she takes her one chance at survival- a suicide mission to the planet of Capricornia. Now Vera and her teenage bodyguard must solve the planet's mystery together before time runs out. If they fail, she dies.

Highest Ranking: #11 in Science Fiction, March 15, 2016.
A Wattpad Featured Story: February 11, 2016.

Special thanks to @cwcrowe for beta reading and providing many helpful suggestions to improve my work.

I think this my favorite cover yet, though I did like the red one.
Finally starting this! And already love it! That first paragraph might be the best opening I've read yet on Wattpad. Great writing. The voice is so strong, and there is so much tension so quickly, it is outstanding :)
JHuggett JHuggett Feb 13
I like, only thing(it's probably fine and I just don't know what I'm talking about) is when you say she is slight, I've never heard that used in such away before. At first I though you meant slim, then I searched it up and realized you were right. Very good so far.
amzolt amzolt May 08
Whoa! That first paragraph is killer!
                              
                              The rest ain't bad either :-)
                              
                              Finally got here and glad I did...
Very nice opening, grabs the attention of the reader straight away :)
Interesting start! I had thought while reading that she has just been in the wrong place at the wrong time. However, that interesting ending where she says the gun was in her hand...well that certainly made me second guess myself! 
                              
                              Good start!