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The fat girl

The fat girl

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Satarina By Satarina16 Updated Jun 18

This story talk about a high school girl which is fat but beautiful but everyone make fun of her her dad dead when she was in middle school from that time she started to get fat there is a lot of people bully her but the number one is guy who's the most famous one in school so what well happened will she change , will she get friends or even lover find out in this story :)

Queen4482 Queen4482 15 hours ago
It's a great story so far, but as a future tip, try working on your grammar
When I read this my head tiene siento one of those anime bobble heads from anime shows with the white eyes 
                              (°○°) i tried my best to represent my face and my head was just bubbling on its own
eldorado16 eldorado16 Sep 10, 2015
Your descriptions are vivid - what a horrible bully that guy is! That's how they work - they weaken you so you can't fight back, because bullies are always cowards and they don't pick on strong people! I hope she finds her strength!
eldorado16 eldorado16 Aug 28, 2015
I like Victoria's voice and I know what it's like for people to look at me like I'm an alien! I hope she doesn't get skinny - in the real beauty and love can be "fat" too ;)  Nice first chapter!