When Dean and Sam found her she was chained to the walls of a cave. Rose looked horrible. The two brothers save her and soon find that's she's very special.
I'm super confused, you keep going from third to first/second person. I'll keep reading because the plot is interesting. I'll just ignore the changing views.
"Dad went on a hunting trip, and he hasn't been home in a few days."
When you write a story get the best line right no offense 😂❤️
I'm very new at this so I'm not sure how to make a cast but I will try and figure out how