Father daughter incest (ON HOLD)

Father daughter incest (ON HOLD)

50.5K Reads 296 Votes 4 Part Story
Darian Marie Varano By DEATHSDOOR6666 Updated Oct 18, 2015

This story is about a father mated to his daughter

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artsychai artsychai May 22
your story sounds good but i don't wanna be rude. i just think it'd be better if you used quotations so we know when the father or the daughter is speaking? that'd make the reading a lot easier. :) but keep up the good work it's a good book!
Surfboart Surfboart Nov 29, 2016
I'm Sorry you are a terrible writer dont write anymore stories learn how to capture the reader you pig you discuss me. Just terrible
DEATHSDOOR6666 DEATHSDOOR6666 Jul 12, 2016
Thanks for your input on my writing any thing would be appreciated right now, and I love your stories
Xx_Weirdo_xX Xx_Weirdo_xX Jul 12, 2016
When they say something, you should make that it's own line. I had to re-read once. But, overall, great start.