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Cold Waters

Cold Waters

95.4K Reads 2.7K Votes 52 Part Story
Stephanie Midorii By smidorii Completed

(The Taking Risks Series - Book 1) Mimi Bennett is a sarcastic, coffee addicted high school graduate who can't wait to move out with her best friend, Jace Oaken. Zion Reyes is his mysterious and devilishly handsome older brother who agrees to let them move in with him after his previous roommates move out.   
    Jace is the person she turns to for everything. He understands her just as well as she understands him. They see each other's vice and virtues and still love the other unconditionally.     
    Zion is bad news. He's dangerous and reckless, but he has his own twisted ways that she soon comes to understand, and maybe even like.     
    They're expecting it to be all fun and games but the experience turns out to be a lot more than any of them could have hoped for. Friendships are challenged, risks are taken, and desires are risen.   Mimi's in uncharted territory, living here with these two, and it's time she finds a way to test the waters, no matter how cold they may be. Along the way, Mimi learns what it means to be a friend, a daughter and a lover.  *UNEDITED*

astrobiology astrobiology Jul 02, 2014
Notice how most of the male cast is so attractive they take your breath away. And then there is the always amazing Lilly Collins! I officially love your cast!
ZzzLazyZzz ZzzLazyZzz May 15, 2014
Pretty good start. Some typos here and there, but that's okay if you fix it. :)
missyxmysterious missyxmysterious Mar 05, 2014
I like the plot, got me curious! Really liked this chapter, so I guess I'll have to wait and see how the rest turns out! :)
Poodlesaurus Poodlesaurus Jan 05, 2014
Well, it was a bit short, which I understand, as this is the intro. I was a bit bored, which again, is understandable as this is the intro. I'm going to give this one a shot, because it sticks out from all of the other stories I've read about girls aged 10-20.
smidorii smidorii Aug 05, 2013
@Jze1812 Ugh, really? You again? Stop with the fake rating spam, kid. It does you no good.
smidorii smidorii Jul 01, 2013
@DaisyKate Haha, yeah. It's just an introduction to Mimi and her leaving :) Haha thanks! I actually know someone named Zion and I love that name so I thought, why not, haha.