The Hybrid Alpha King

The Hybrid Alpha King

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Rachelb9234 By Rachelb9234 Completed

I felt the house shake with the thunder, but knew it wasn't the storm that was giving me this uneasy feeling. 
"He's here," Melissa said, glancing at Nick who took a protective stance in front of her. 
"Don't worry. The warriors will stop him," He assured us, but I wasn't convinced. 
No one could stop him from getting what he wants. 
Another lighting bolt struck, and all the power in the house went out. 
"Wonderful," I muttered, knowing my day was only about to get so much better. 
"Do you th-" Melissa was cut off with the door slamming open.
Another flash of lighting illumanated the figure in the doorway. 
"Honey, I'm home," he sang in a sickly sweet voice. 
And even with Nick shifting, I knew it was all over. 
There was no stopping the Alpha King.


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likki277 likki277 Aug 07
hey Rachel just ignore them ur book is gr8 I loved it people r mean coz that is the only thing they know I hope u keep writing I really loved it 😘
I hate when people leave rude comments. Its just mess. Like you got nothing else to do, then write rude comments. Well get out of your parents basement and see the world am i right. And thank you for this book you have written can't wait to dig my teeth into it. 🐺
I'm sorry you have to deal with this we should be grateful of you taking time out of your life to entertain others.
AngelLegna13 AngelLegna13 Aug 29, 2016
People got nothing better to do than to hate, believe me I WAS one of them lol...
leecoleloca leecoleloca Jul 17, 2016
Don't listen to the haters with a capital "H". They just mad cause they either liked ur plot and couldn't say it properly or flat out their brain doesn't want to understand it. Also i thought ur intro was hilarious to me.
Lovable_natZz Lovable_natZz Jun 30, 2016
you should know that you will be criticised whether you like it or not...but you shouldn't take back comments as disrespect but use it to help you further strengthen your writing..i hope I didn't offend you.but most of the best authors got the worst criticism..