When the hoolian world is in danger, A Ember king will rise or shall the hoolian kingdom fall. The Darkness is eviler then hagsmere and its coming, A New Age Is Coming.
cool story so far, but there are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, which is making it hard to concentrate...can you please maybe correct those and then post the next chapter
Amazing! >< like guardians of gahoole! and ur story too. write another different genre. i'll definitly read! >< ><
kool story, I absolutely loved the book series! Cant wait to read more. Keep up the good work. ;)
Come People encourage you guys to post comments like how I can make it better or other comments but I dont really care if you post some comment how my writing sucks