Stars

Stars

107K Reads 7.9K Votes 12 Part Story
@AnneeSparrow By enchanto Completed

❝ They watched the stars, night after night ❞

{ Watty 2015 Winner
  Copyright © enchanto. All Rights Reserved }

  • arlando
  • bond
  • connect
  • eyes
  • hazel
  • heart
  • hurt
  • justwriteit
  • kathleen
  • kiss
  • lips
  • love
  • night
  • smile
  • stargaze
  • stars
  • touch
  • university
  • watch
  • wattys2015
sarena_a sarena_a Mar 17
HIS GIRLFRIEND WROTE A BOOK? INSIGHTFUL. I can check one thing off a guys' checklist.
sarena_a sarena_a Mar 17
WRITING TIP: The first sentence seems a bit redundant, so you might want to just add both the traits together. 
                              
                              EXAMPLE#1: "Curiosity and his passion for reading gets the best of him..." 
                              
                              [Also, this mans got no sleep on his mind when it comes to reading. I like him already].
sarena_a sarena_a Mar 17
THIS IS SUCH A NICE QUESTION ENDING FOR A SUMMARY AND GIVES JUST THE RIGHT AMOUNT OF DETAIL FOR US. 
                              
                              WRITING TIP: lowercase the "can".
Adrian_DC Adrian_DC Mar 15, 2016
My high school flame writes poetry... I WISH THIS HAPPENS TO ME!!!!
RoseNic RoseNic Jul 16, 2016
He can and he will. If he won't I'll punch him square in the face. 😁
MahiraFarhin MahiraFarhin May 01, 2016
This sounds so interesting and refreshing. Can't wait to read it!