Emptiness

Emptiness

2.7K Reads 125 Votes 1 Part Story
Ely By Mr_Cape Updated Sep 28, 2010

poetry,emptiness,comfort,dark

stukagurl13 stukagurl13 Jan 03, 2011
@Schizo you are really good and I love your poem.... It's amazing how simple words can be related to so many different lives, mine included..... Can anyone else agree???  
Beme4life333 Beme4life333 Dec 02, 2010
Im in love with this poem. Literally. It describes exactly how I feel at the moment, not to be all depressing or anything. Anywho, I really love this one. 
writersLife writersLife Nov 23, 2010
this is for me and L and ulquirria XC ~crys since they both died in bleach and death note~
torih7 torih7 Nov 23, 2010
@chameleon8408 I completely agree. I had trouble reading it because of the lack of cadence. The stanza cut offs are too random.
Vampires4EverYoung Vampires4EverYoung Nov 20, 2010
Nice!
                              Loved it
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                              I think you might lie them :)
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