A Falling Ember

A Falling Ember

11.2K Reads 579 Votes 37 Part Story
Evie By foof_girl_rocks Completed

This is the story of a young wild horse's fight for freedom after her herd is captured by humans.

Hello! I love your story so much you are a great writer! Could you possibly read my story, Desolation? It would mean so much, thanks!
foof_girl_rocks foof_girl_rocks Dec 27, 2015
@bone_crusher that part that u didn't understand means that Ember asked her mother "what is that" a lot of times
bone_crusher bone_crusher Dec 27, 2015
This story is already exciting! I can't wait for your next story!
bone_crusher bone_crusher Dec 27, 2015
I love this chapter! There is one part I don't  get though: soon I asked her to many " what's " . What does that mean?
bone_crusher bone_crusher Dec 26, 2015
Sorry, posted that without finishing- the whole first chapter.
bone_crusher bone_crusher Dec 26, 2015
Great work Evie!, I love how much you detailed the feeling dialogue in the whole