A Falling Ember

A Falling Ember

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Evie By foof_girl_rocks Completed

This is the story of a young wild horse's fight for freedom after her herd is captured by humans.

  • adventure
  • family
  • freedom
  • horses
  • wild
This is a good story! I’m even making a similar story, but I started creating this before I read Falling Ember. Sry! But thx! This gives me a lot of inspiration and your a great author! Maybe you should be one?!
missviolet613 missviolet613 Feb 15, 2016
Hello! I love your story so much you are a great writer! Could you possibly read my story, Desolation? It would mean so much, thanks!
bone_crusher bone_crusher Dec 26, 2015
Sorry, posted that without finishing- the whole first chapter.
bone_crusher bone_crusher Dec 26, 2015
Great work Evie!, I love how much you detailed the feeling dialogue in the whole
Mamacush Mamacush Sep 12, 2015
Great paragraph! I don't think you need "sensing my confusion" though. The reader understands without being told, quite often.
Mamacush Mamacush Sep 12, 2015
You don't really need this sentence, I think--it's more efficient without it and we understand what's going on.