The Second Eliza

The Second Eliza

898 Reads 11 Votes 5 Part Story
Annie By anniecullenzz Updated Dec 05, 2010

When the Aeriz's come to Eliza Limescotch's school, she realises she's not the only one with a magical past anymore. 
As a Demistar, she has to go back in time to Lenaysia to prevent Gandurf from killing Queen Havelynn. She has to pretend she's Princess Lizandra, and discovers the mysterious Riley who would do anything to protect her.
But is this fifteen year old girl strong enough to save the Kingdom? 

With her power undiscovered, she might be...

HOPE YOU LIKE IT!! Please comment and rate, tell me what you think is wrong because there's always room for improvement!!


AlwaysandForever AlwaysandForever Sep 30, 2010
this is really really good!!!! i am in love!! and i love your cast!!! xx
Emmiie Emmiie Sep 29, 2010
Off to a good start, very original, and you chose an awesome cast! :) 
                              Best of luck in the Watty Awards!! xDxD
                              Much love,
                              -- Emma. <3
RiverSong33 RiverSong33 Sep 29, 2010
you go to your story groups, click "edit," then click "change" that is unnderneath the large image, or gey spot, ot lack of image, then clich"browse," and chooe from your photo library or desktop or whatever.
RiverSong33 RiverSong33 Sep 26, 2010
i really, really, REALLLY, love this. i can't wait ti find out what happenes next! nice names, and your words have a drawn quite a picture for me.