THE UNFINISHED SONG [ON HOLD]

THE UNFINISHED SONG [ON HOLD]

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Shadow_Heart By Shadow_Heart13 Updated Dec 11, 2016

A song that is left unfinished and untold yet alot of secret it holds never even finished but only contains 3 words and what are those words you may ask well join Ayumi in her Adventure and await for the surprises it will reveal

This also doesn't follow the episodes


Disclaimer: I don't own Brother Conflict only my OC

  • asahina
  • brocon
  • brotherconflict
  • fanfiction
  • got7
  • kpop
  • reverse-harem
  • romance
SilverlineF SilverlineF Aug 26
You should take time editing your story:
                              -Put the "" signs
                              -Separate your thoughts in different sentences
                              
                              But, I still like your story. You have a creative imagination and determination to continue your story.
Shadow_Heart13 Shadow_Heart13 Sep 24, 2015
I'll take note off that thanks for the suggestion akemi-chan
TheBlackCatss TheBlackCatss Sep 24, 2015
I suggest that you put " " when they talk. So we can understand properly. But overall it's good. Though there's a little wrong grammar but it's okay. Can't wait to see whats in the next chapter (^▽^)