Another Take (A Naruto Fanfiction) (Complete)

Another Take (A Naruto Fanfiction) (Complete)

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Kiyomi Himura has a rather large problem. A chakra beast with an earth nature, the wolf named Fenrir, sealed himself inside her at a young age. Originally from Yamagakure, the Village Hidden in the Mountains, Kiyomi had to leave at the age of five when her parents died on a mission. Her brother Kaien took them to Konohagakure, the original home of their parents, and the Hokage allowed them to settle in.
Fast forward four years, and now Kaien is dead. He'd attempted the same mission as their parents, and while his team completed it, he died in the process. But Kiyomi isn't alone. She still has her guardian Hachi, a retired Jonin who the Hokage assigned to look after her, considering she was nine. And of course, Fenrir is still there inside her. 
Kiyomi grows with the Hidden Leaf, knowing all the other would-be shinobi in her class, including Naruto Uzumaki and Sasuke Uchiha. But she keeps herself distant, seeing how they treat Naruto, who's also housing a beast. 
And she stays this way until the graduation.
Kiyomi's placed on the five-man team of Team Seven, and has no other choice but to open up to her teammates, and the other graduates. She learns more about her connection to Fenrir, and how to utilize it in a fight, giving her a unique fighting style few others could accomplish. And she may also find romance along her journey of adventure, mystery, and everything else being a shinobi is about! That totally didn't sound cliche or anything...
*Quick Author's Note- In this story, all teams will have five members. All canon teams, I have added an OC to. Just to make sure you're all not confused.
Cover credit to ILoveWolvezz!

Don't worry!! I love your books!! But for some reason people are reading my book but aren't commenting!! :(  It makes me soooo sad..
Are you cool with constructive criticism because some aren't and others encourage it? Or are you already aware of the mistakes and are just like "ya could but I know about them, I just haven't gotten around to fixing them" ?
Birdmandeaky Birdmandeaky 3 days ago
No problem though, i will read your story until the end, this looks interesting
The fear of saying something wrong and then being told off or hated..... Usually doesn't stop me a whole lot but it still restricts me.
I'm rly looking forward to this, and had to wait since I finished ur last series!
Did you update the cover photo? I think it looks really cool!