The Devil's Ex Wife

The Devil's Ex Wife

459K Reads 14.1K Votes 28 Part Story
Eye By UndertheMountain Updated Jul 27

A poor person.
A rich person.
It will never work out.
And it didn't work out. We went our separate ways.
Working to save my life, I didn't even recover until he stepped back into my live.

Lynn Spears works cleaning a small school, and sometimes a waitress. 
She didn't care much anymore about her life, all of the moneys goes to her father hospital bills and her little boy.


Then fate plays a cruel trick.
Jace Sparks, richest man, and a devil decide to visit a school that needs help and there he
                                  met his ex wife who he once loved.
Maybe still do?

There is always someone that wants your happiness gone.

"Come back to me."
- Jace Sparks
Sorry if my grammar sucks.

ZuyyinIzza ZuyyinIzza May 04
Why are you following her around like a puppy? Then all you do is insult her? It's like taking a cab to go across the street, has no Logic whatsoever
eryhon03 eryhon03 Mar 19
I'm beginning to love the story. Hope you will update regularry :)
How is u kissing her will embarrass her??? Or the best u kiss her in if she slaps u then who should hide their face ??
Montecelliana Montecelliana Dec 30, 2015
Not to be rude or a grammar nazi, but this is a dependent clause. It doesn't fit in with the rest of what you're saying if you don't add an independent clause. Maybe you forgot to add the rest?
dexpresso dexpresso Dec 26, 2015
This book would be 10x better if you fixed the grammar and punctuation.