Camping with the Bad Boy

Camping with the Bad Boy

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= lizzy = By deliriousociety Updated May 11

Amanda and her friends spent their summer at a cabin by the lake before their senior year of high school.

Except they're not the only ones with the same idea. Amanda soon finds out that the cabin next door to theirs is filled with attractive boys looking for fun.

Amanda meets the bad boy of the group named Jace and wishes that he would leave with his snobby, clingy girlfriend.

But, when Jace meets her, he doesn't seem to leave her alone. But Amanda doesn't want that. She doesn't want him to know about her past. And certainly doesn't want to get to know him.

He might be able to help with her insomnia but can he help break down her titanium walls?

Monika_321 Monika_321 Jan 30
Omg Cameron Dallas and Clara delivenge (idk how to spell her last name)
 #mbga It was pretty good. The whole pushing him away with the flat of her hand seems a bit unrealistic, as well as the dialogue around there. One of the biggest things I suggest is to go back and proof-read. I noticed quite a bit of typos.
I do love the length of your chapters :D Hahaha. I think I want Brooke as my best friend, that would be amazeballs. She does nothing but make me laugh XD
OKAY SO THIS STORY IS CREEPING ME OUT BECAUSE MY NAME IS JACE AND I WAS LEGIT READING A SUMMER CAMP STORY BEFORE THIS AND CHANGED THE MALE CHARACTER TO FRANCISCO SKFJJSJFJSJ AND NOW I SAW THIS HOLY DIJS
Wait u'll see me in the next one? That's kinda creepy. Unless, *gasp* Santa clause u r real!?! And ur writing a romantic story about a girl and a bad boy in the summer?
 #mbga sentence and wording could be worked on a bit. Also, when you were describing the scenario between Amanda and Cameron it seemed like she was truly afraid, not just being playful.