Camping with the Bad Boy

Camping with the Bad Boy

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= lizzy = By deliriousociety Updated Feb 24

Amanda and her friends spent their summer at a cabin by the lake before their senior year of high school.

Except they're not the only ones with the same idea. Amanda soon finds out that the cabin next door to theirs is filled with attractive boys looking for fun.

Amanda meets the bad boy of the group named Jace and wishes that he would leave with his snobby, clingy girlfriend.

But, when Jace meets her, he doesn't seem to leave her alone. But Amanda doesn't want that. She doesn't want him to know about her past. And certainly doesn't want to get to know him.

He might be able to help with her insomnia but can he help break down her titanium walls?

priyatato priyatato Jul 25
@peachtree457 UMM EX-CUH-USE MEH?! Rood. Peachtree? More like... preach tea?
Monika_321 Monika_321 Jan 30, 2016
Omg Cameron Dallas and Clara delivenge (idk how to spell her last name)
AthenaElsmford AthenaElsmford Dec 08, 2016
Really good! The only thing that could be improved is using the correct there(there, their, and they're), and using the correct your(your, or you're).
GoddessKalypso GoddessKalypso May 18, 2016
 #mbga It was pretty good. The whole pushing him away with the flat of her hand seems a bit unrealistic, as well as the dialogue around there. One of the biggest things I suggest is to go back and proof-read. I noticed quite a bit of typos.
francinewrites_ francinewrites_ Feb 05, 2016
I do love the length of your chapters :D Hahaha. I think I want Brooke as my best friend, that would be amazeballs. She does nothing but make me laugh XD
xgllvich_ xgllvich_ Aug 19, 2016
OKAY SO THIS STORY IS CREEPING ME OUT BECAUSE MY NAME IS JACE AND I WAS LEGIT READING A SUMMER CAMP STORY BEFORE THIS AND CHANGED THE MALE CHARACTER TO FRANCISCO SKFJJSJFJSJ AND NOW I SAW THIS HOLY DIJS