Chaos World

Chaos World

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Nedon Rey Cole By tops29 Updated Nov 26

Mike, a comatose patient for over two years, finally woke up. His doctor told him he only got three months to live. He stayed awake all night when suddenly an earthquake struck. The ground below his bed opened and swallowed him. When he woke up, he was already in a different world.

Unfortunately for him, he was still dying in that world. However, he was given a second chance at life by an unexpected savior and found out the world he was currently in is moved by magic. He changed his name and swore to live his life freely and enjoyably as he never got to live enough in his previous world.

He ventured on that world, meeting with variety of people and many unexpected missions as he grow and master the art of magic.

doger492 doger492 Nov 29
You have a mix of past tense and present tense here, I think you should replace can't with couldn't
ughh... cannibalism. That's pretty outlandish. Though I think your main character is too darn relaxed, too composed and casual. I would have panicked if it was me. 
                              
                              The idea though I like much, I'll keep on reading 😁
I imagine what you meant by meat there. Hahahaha, this stuff is fun :)
                              
                              I like reading stories like this :)
God is unpredictable *sigh* but god does things with a meaning...I think
Sooo this is where Fantasy stories are now? Cannibalism?! 
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              I mean this in a good way not bad