The Football Player's Unknown Children

The Football Player's Unknown Children

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Scarlett Burk is 21 years old. She had been dating her boyfriend, Braden Parker, for 6 years. Her boyfriend just graduated from Oregon State University and she is one year away from graduating at the same college.

Braden Parker is 22 years old. He has been dating his girlfriend, Scarlett Burk, for 6 years. He just graduated from Oregon State University and is now going into the NFL, but he wants to be free to do things without a girlfriend breathing down his neck. So he breaks up with her, but not before she gets pregnant with his children.

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  • athena
  • braden
  • choices
  • dalton
  • football
  • greenbay
  • leaving
  • nfl
  • nile
  • pregnant
  • sarlett
  • triplets
Bruh I swear the "wait..." line had me in tears laughing it's so cliche, I honestly love it. It would be a wattpad story without it <3
IbtisaamJones IbtisaamJones Nov 18, 2016
It's a really great start.. maybe you shouldn't put so any unnecessary details in and unnecessary dialogue it's not really needed. It would also be great if you could show some more emotions and not just her saying things that's happening around her all the time.
vixen89 vixen89 Jan 09, 2017
That wasn't painful at all... We don't even know the people that well to feel sad.
giana32 giana32 Sep 08, 2016
How's that possible how did she know they where *twins* and non twin
mayminou mayminou Dec 14, 2016
U don't ask u'r daughter why she need a doctor appointment ?!? What kind of parents are u
heartsophia_xoxo heartsophia_xoxo Feb 15, 2017
I thought it was painful because she was trying to be brave and not cry in front of him in order to not be defenseless