G.A.L.E. Force - Duology | ✔

G.A.L.E. Force - Duology | ✔

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Persephone Snickedy By Perci_Snickedy Completed

If you create the ultimate weapon, it may choose to turn on you . . .

    When a young woman snags Lawrence Croxley from the train station, he soon realizes that being late for work is the least of his problems.

    She plans to use his access to a major news network's cameras in order to warn the public of a massive syndicate, one that has sinister plans for her and the others like her. This shadowy group will do anything to stop her and Lawrence, throwing everyone into a high-stakes game of chess where checkmate means the end of life as we know it. Fortunately, she has a few technological tricks up her sleeve that might help them cheat the game rules and save us all.

    As the pair works together, something seems to connect them on a level he doesn't understand--not that he minds a connection with such a pretty girl. But as Lawrence becomes further tangled in this global conspiracy, things like a car chase, getting his best friend captured and a corrupt cop all show him just how in over his head he is. And when the fate of the world is quite literally placed into his hands, he is forced to decide who will live and who will die.

 ~ Completed duology of two romantic sci-fi thrillers.

 ~Winner of seventeen awards, including:
 ~The Wave Awards: winner of Sci-Fi and Project Waves (overall)
 ~The Ooorahs: co-winner of Superhuman
 ~Winner of the Cryptic's Choice Award
 ~The Summer Awards: winner of Sci-Fi
 ~The Flowers Awards: winner of Sci-Fi
 ~The Winter Wonderland Awards: first place in Sci-Fi
 ~The Revolutionary Contest: winner of Kapoww (Action) in season 2

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heyhannahj heyhannahj Oct 12
The last sentence strikes me as a little awkward. Maybe "of course, it was rare to find downtown Atlanta not gridlocked" or something of that ilk.
                              Hey I'm a judge from the BCSA that you won second place in. What I really enjoy about your story is your character, he's so relatable. When you write his thoughts, they just crack me up. Greats writing!
heyhannahj heyhannahj Oct 12
Woohoo! Great first chapter. The tone really surprised me--I was expecting something more serious, but Lawrence's tone is a little more comical. It makes the story distinctive!
What have you a hint ? The throwing up? The shaking ? No shitake mushroom, Sherlock!  Hahahaha!
Hahahaha! People have mocked me about my brown eyes so much that I made my heroine's eyes glow blue when she turns evil. Love this bit in your heroine !!
I guess it's a wattpad thing. I've never seen it elsewhere either