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Lady of Deep Waters (Early Draft) (A Free 'Verse New World Story)

Lady of Deep Waters (Early Draft) (A Free 'Verse New World Story)

330 Reads 18 Votes 4 Part Story
Jodi Ralston By jodiralston Completed

Story by Jodi Ralston; Cover Design by CoverD, original stock photography by Marcus Ranum.

Near death, Mr. Ayers stumbles across a statue-fountain of a lady in the wilds of the New World. It points him in the direction of a mansion, whose sole, male inhabitant looks eerily like the statue, and he begins to wonder who or what truly saved him.

*Note 1*:  This is not the final version of this story.
*Note 2*:  This series is set in a fictionalized place, not our world.

NicoletteAndrews NicoletteAndrews Mar 27, 2013
Oh his new mysterious benefactor gives me the chills, I am not sure if he is friend or foe and this point which is delightful!
NicoletteAndrews NicoletteAndrews Mar 27, 2013
Absolutely beautiful prose, I love the ways in which you described the fountain and the character's reaction it was almost lyrical which I love.